Tohami Success Secrets: 6 Surefire Secrets to Everlasting Sucess By Mohamed Tohami
Readable and Passionate, January 21, 2007
Reviewer: Kosta Efstathiou
TOHAMI's Success Secrets
By Mohamed Tohami
Pros:
It's a quick read and you might learn something or get inspired. He is passionate in his writing.
Cons:
It is poorly formatted; all 1 sentence paragraphs and indented with excessive spacing. The 45-page eBook formatted properly would be 20 pages.
There are numerous uses of improper verb tense and the use of plural or singular.
Bottom Line:
Most of his ideas for success are good. I suggest you read the eBook if you have 10-15 minutes to spare and read it with "The Magic Formula" By Simon Hodgkinson in order to get on the fast track to success.
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Tohami Success Secrets: 6 Surefire Secrets to Everlasting Sucess By Mohamed Tohami
Content is good, but the book needs to be edited, April 07, 2007
Reviewer: Lynn Lopez
Just to get this thought out of the way: this e-book is very exuberant. Especially when you read a sentence in the introduction which says "I decided to...reveal my secrets!!!" Yeah, it's got a lot of exclamation points littered throughout the e-book, which are probably meant to convey excitement and positivity, but which are no-nos in writing.
Anyway, it's not a very well-written e-book, to be quite frank. Sure, the principles and guidelines are easily understandable, but there's something about the e-book itself that made my attention wander. Also, it's mostly made up of extremely brief, even one-sentence paragraphs. Probably not a problem for many people, but I'm personally displeased by them, especially if they're all following a single idea and should have been put together in one paragraph in the first place, to make it even more easy to follow. If you find it hard to read (just the format, not the wording) but somehow plow through it anyway, you'll find that most of the tips are very encouraging and worth following.
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Tohami Success Secrets: 6 Surefire Secrets to Everlasting Sucess By Mohamed Tohami
Secrets you should know – and remember, August 15, 2007
Very inspiring and enlightening read. Tohami’s powerful statements have an electrifying, do-it-right-now quality that can alert the reader to assess his current situation and take massive action.. With his six secrets, Tohami shows the roadblocks to success and the way to overcome them. Tohami teaches the right mindset and attitude for success and the way to achieve it. Tohami also offers a different and eye-opening perspective on success which is not based on power and intelligence but on service.
Tohami ends his book in a high note by giving the formula not just to success, but to everlasting success and encourages the reader to stand up for his/her dreams.
Tohami’s prose is written in flowing, conversational style that makes the reader’s eye effortlessly move from one page to the next. While there are minor errors in grammar, these do not significantly decrease the impact of the message. Truly, this e-book is a wonderful read.
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Tohami Success Secrets: 6 Surefire Secrets to Everlasting Sucess By Mohamed Tohami
worth reading also, August 31, 2007
Reviewer: Lorie Therese Locara
Most success and motivational gurus nowadays hawk so many “secrets” to successful living that either sound alike or are just plain cliché already, that you would be disillusioned about it. Honestly, I am tempted to both rave and shoot down this e-book precisely because there are glaring reasons why you shouldn’t pick it up. But I have my reasons for reading it through, too.
1) The principles here have already been said elsewhere, even better.
2) The grammatical errors and weird-sounding syntax could get distracting.
3) The e-book needs to be better organized.
But I decided to read the e-book through because I realized that there are things that he Tohami said in a light that I didn’t see before. Even if he did say it in an acronym of his name, still, there were fresh insights to age-old truths that lead to success: self-control, right mindset, taking responsibility, persistence, the importance of networking, and the most crucial factor: defining your purpose.
Bottom line: others have written better material, but this is worth reading, too.
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